Sunday, June 29, 2014

How the sun has Impact on us?


Writing Purpose: Explain How or Why
WALT organise our ideas into an effective structure
Success Criteria

Title which asks a question about the topic
Beginning, middle and end (like a hamburger)
Introduction links to conclusion
Paragraph groups of sentences
Cause and effect (because, if, so, as a result, then...)
Key topic words

How the sun had Impact on us?
Have you ever wondered how the sun has an impact on us? Well you will soon find out. The sun is one of the most important things ever. We would be dead without it.
The sun as a massive impact on us because if there was no sun we would be dead but if there was no atmosphere we would also be dead. The sun has impact on a lot of things plants and plenty of other things including us. If there was no sun, the plants would not grow because, they need water and sunlight. Even though the sun is a dwarf star, it is close to us enough to keep our planet spinning every day. 

Our sun is a fiery gas ball but it contains heat that beams down on us. The beams would be much hotter if we did not have our atmosphere. Did you know the sun has impact on the moon? The moon shines down when the sun is not facing us so there is light up in the night sky. The moon gets it's brightness from the sun because, the sun shines on to the moon and the light reflects down onto earth. Some houses are solar powered so if the sun stopped working they would have no power. Our sun is a massive chunk of our planet. It keeps us living. The sun beats down on us and gives us everything we need. 

This is how the sun has impact on us. The sun is a key thing in a humans life cycle as well as plants and trees. The sun is a massive part of peoples lives.
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1 comment:

  1. That's so cool Matilda like the photo.
    Great writing too.

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