WALT describe using the 5 senses
- look
- hear.
- taste.
- smell.
- feel or touch.
My scene: In the jungle and I am a monkey
The shade cooled my fur right over my back. I could hear the the other monkeys squawking and swimming in the nearby water hole. The air smelt so delicious, of yummy bananas. I wished the bananas would just appear in front of me, it was just too hot to move. The air tasted like juicy fruits, it just made me hungrier and hungrier. The green,green grass the bananas hidden in the leaves. I gazed and gazed at the trees. Finally, I was off in another world .
cool mitlda like the ending good work
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